Review for Broken Down On Memory Lane

Broken Down On Memory Lane

(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-20

She said it was Joe's??? Of course it isn't Joe's... hopefully Patrick isn't stupid enough to believe that, but then again he is a bit of a pushover. I mean, it would be more than obvious when the baby never grew a fro, surely Kate knows that. Or maybe she just didn't think fast enough... Oh well.

I adored the fight. So angry and completely believable. I just want them to be yelling at eachother and then suddenly be all 'take me now'. Oh well, I know it's wishful thinking. But a girl can dream, right?

Ahhhh!!! I can't believe you left us right there. I need to know what happens next so very desperately. I'm addicted to Kate/Patrick. I'm just glad Meg didn't get to ruin anything this time. Or maybe she did by just being alive and Patick pretending to love her. What a joke.

Ok, well, you probably get really sick of my essays that aren't really productive or helpful at all. Just know that this story is AMAZING and you totally make my day every time you update. Seriously. Ok, well, I need to put my essay skills elseware... in the direction of church-state relations. Ug, shoot me now... but first have a nice little point. You know there are more where that came from my dear...

Author's response

ahh you know i love your review essays to the max - in fact i write a new chapter just so i can get one, lol.
and,

"I just want them to be yelling at eachother and then suddenly be all 'take me now'. Oh well, I know it's wishful thinking. But a girl can dream, right?"

almost freaking happened i was so close you don't even know!!! i don't know why i changed routes, don't worry though their time will come. lol.
as always i love you times infinity.
xxxxxo.