First of all, the kids are absolutely amazing. I love them. Rory especially... on her period, lol.
Second of all... OMG!!!! Pete? PETE???
You are evil. Pure evil... here I am, gushing over how perfect their love is and Shay is... you know... not being perfectly in love!
I don't know what to think. I'm all jumpled in my thoughts.
But it was written just superbly! I loved how real it all sounded. I could totally believe it was happening. Sooo... fantastic job, again. I think it should be your upmost important task to finish another chapter asap. Seriously.
(Ok, I just re-read my review and it's a little spastic, but hopefully still understandable. I thought it was fantastically exciting and all that!)