Review for Forbidden

Forbidden

(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-21

woot,have funnn in Milan^__^
to the story thencracks knuckles how dares that Evils masterpiece go there and throw herself at Gerard? (i said it would happen, i have a skill ya know, lol) clearly shoving the turkey upp hers wasnt enough, i'll find some nice forks and put them there too. evil laugh and BOBDAMMIT, just when Chey was having a nice Thanksgiving, she FUCKING RUINED it. rant but i have to say, if Lyn wasnt a total sneaky slut that she is, and if Chey wasnt that nice girlie she is, it was pretty perfectly evilly done by Lyn. cant believe she actually said that
and LMFAO-ROFL to Frank.^___^ i could totally picture him lifting his shirt and all. and Mikey then! awwwwwww totally amusing.
and what im saying under all this yadda-yadda (yadda-yadda, LOL), is that its effing amazing story and you keep it coming as sooooo..goes on for a while....oon as you can.

Author's response

loool I can't but laugh when I see you've reviewed. I'll try and have fun in Milan I'm one of those rare girls who dislikes shopping (unless I'm buying gifts for other people then I can shop for hours) yeah and I aint to keen on flying either.
To the story- we moved from turkey shoving to cutlery looks worriedly at you BOBDAMMIT LMAO how did you come up with that one lol. I'm glad you saw the humour in the chapter put it there esp for you. I'll update soon I promise just so you can have another reason to hate Lyn.