There's a lot of "hoping we're not too late" in this, huh? Hee hee. Good. Any is a bit more tempramental than usual, but I can way picture that. Sonic saying "Luvey-duvey crap" was pretty funny too. XD Very good. At one point, you had "clam" instead of "calm" (a mistake I make ALL THE TIME), and once you had "quite" instead of "quiet". Only one more piece of grammar awfulness that even I hate-- when a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph.
I'M SO EXCITED! EEEEEEEEEE! This is SO COOL!