not to be rude, but this is horrid.
I did not understand a single thing that you wrote let alone the names.... It makes no sense and I don't know why i bothere.d.. i went to rate it but it can't be rated any lower.
might wanna try a bit harder next time.
Author's response
I'm so sorry,but it is really hard typing something that came stright from my head.The second chapter should be better