Um...Archie's 18 and Atlanta's 17 is that right? Why would they be--um--you know, and in the hallway, then? All the same it's really good, and the rating's probably a good one. I mean, you don't want 13 year olds--especially 13 year olds who act like 5 year olds when it comes to fluff--reading about...that.
Author's response
I think Archies 17 and Atlanta's 16, but you cant say i did not give you a warning... I actually gave two. Glad you liked it.