Wow, this is intriguing. I'm very curious as to what will happen next. You have a very good writing style and a very original story. Keep writing! :)
Author's response
Thanks. That's pretty much all five of my goals in a nutshell: 1. Keep it interesting, 2. Keep people guessing (and curious), 3. Have my own style, 4. Be original, and 5. Having people want me to write more.
Wow. That was oddly specific.