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The Last Fight
The Last Fight
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Arisey
2006-05-31
I agree with Pheonee, Jay wouldn't call Theresa a spoiled brat or freak, plus he wouldn't talk about Theresa's mom like that, but it was still really good. I love how you use 'descriptive language' (as my teacher would say).