"Well, next time, why don't you just whip it out and piss on my leg like a dog marking its territory," I spat in his face. Haha! That’s the DoJ talking right there….
JB was right. Why was I defending Pete? You know what, JB is way too intuitive, there has to be a flaw with him, now, I know he’s your boyfriend and all but really…lets whack a massive flaw on him. Lol
I put my head down as he stepped forward slightly and began to rub his hands up and down my arms. Yeah, Can I have JB – please?
"Pete," I said simply staring at him. Can you smell that? That’s overdue drama right therrrrrr yo
He looked tired, but sultry. That was way too descriptive for the size of that sentence……I love you.
"Breathe," he whispered against my skin causing me to shudder again. OK, actually, what you were doing there was reminding the readers to breathe…
"I took him to the airport around 3:00 this morning. He went back West. To find her," Patrick said quietly. No, No, No…No Way…
CeCe, you , my dear, are a bundle of drama filled joy that I can just open whenever I want. I printed off I remember last night and re-read it. God, you are good….
Author's response
Katy! I LOVE your reviews! They make me laugh and inspire me to write better. So thanks!
Alright. I'm glad you like the dog marking its territory comment. Yes, I think that was DoJ inspired. Also, I don't know if I can give JB massive flaw. He is afterall my boyfriend! And no you can't have him! He's mine! HA HA HA!
I'm glad that you are liking this story. It's also good that I keep well, so I'm still fresh when you open up this can of drama filled joy whenever you wish. I re-read I Remember all the time. Katy, you my dear, are good! SMOOCHES to the max!