Ok so adding to our hitlist - Bitch Waddington the Nurse, I would say the Mob but those suckers scare the poop out of me so I say we steer clear of killing off 'The Family.'
And you have no idea how the 'love' scene made my day I was in the middle of reading when I blurted outloud, mind you,
"Oh My God They Are Going To Have Sex In The Hospital!!!!"
which they didn't but it's perfectly understandable 'cause Patrick is all broken and injured and such - but it still made my day and you did a wonderful job writing it.
I am so excited that you updated, I can't wait for more - this story really has me on the edge of my seat, actually I think I will start getting 'The Mistake' cravings which I don't know how I will live though.
Fantastic Job - POINTSSS INFINITY FOR YOU!
xxxxo
Author's response
Ok, so I'm sitting here, trying very hard to not have essay-like responses to this because that would jsut be a little crazy... nah, nevermind. Anyway, I would never put anyone in the mob on a hitlist either. Those suckers are MEAN... (I mean, very kind and generous, I love you, Mob!!!) And really... sex in a hospital? I really made you believe that they would go that far? Wow. I'm glad you liked it because that scene gave me the most trouble... Oh! And hopefully I'll update again soon to your cravings don't get too bad. If they're anything like my 'we'll make them so jealous' and 'memory lane' cravings then I definately understand your pain... Yay for points!!! You're amazing, Alex! shit, this is totally an essay...