OMG Alex, you are amazing!!!!!
That sentence totally deserved all the exclimation points.
Well, you definately know how to write. I was sitting there with my mouth open for the entire second half. I mean... wow.
Sooooo... Patrick totally knows it's his. At least he's getting smarter, even if Kate pulled the whole 'only if there is another fetus' (ok, I'm not 100% sure those were your exact words, but it was somthing to that effect and it needed a paraphrase at least) thing. And their insults were too funny too. I mean, kissing a cut probably wouldn't be fun- I'll have to admit- but come on... It's Patrick!
And Pete... I had to love him in this chapter. Especially covering his eyes with his sister and refering to the Yoko Ono bit from chapter 10... totally like him to get all weirded out after he was in charge of the video and all. :)
And I dont know who this Gwen person is, but she seemed pretty great. :) Painting on boob covers and all... my kind of girl.
Ok, so I gave a 'moving' point as opposed to 'hot' because this just didn't feel smutty at all.
Soooo.... yeah. I also loved the other Sophia refrences. They were perfect... the comment about the ex and what to expect from the scene. Totally fantastic.
Ok, crappy review again... very sorry when all I really wanted to way was 'wow' about a hundred times.
Author's response
AHHHH another essay for me to love!
i'm sorry you keep getting jipped out of first review, but you know no matter where your reviews are located they are always amazing.
i love how you pull the sophia bush refrences out, i think your the only one who notices which makes me smile.
also i have no idea who this Gwen character is, but she seems amazing to me.
as always your review was amazing.
xxxo