you are far to gracious to us with your constant updates lately and i'm so grateful for it, this story has me laughing and crying and screaming and jumping in happiness. no joke. you're a graet writer and i love you well your words flow and transition. once again, AMAZING update, im glad patrick isn't an idiot. and i love that pete turns into a 5year old boy when it comes to dirty things and his sister. keep up the great work, as always
Author's response
this review made me laugh i love your analogies and yes, it is good that Patrick isn't an idiot.
thank you so much for reviewing so adamently.
xxxo.