hey lol i like your story!
what did you mean by my plot needs help?
Author's response
Thanks! =) Well, your plot is a bit too fast-paced...there are some stories that are fast-paced, but somehow the author can make it work out right. You have lots of VERY good ideas...some things you've come up with I wish I could've come up with lol...but you need to practice a bit more putting it down on a piece of paper. Otherwise, you didn't do such a bad job! :D
Thanks for reviewing
xoxo nat