I loved the last line, oh and she's an aussie! how awesome :)
I'm not australien myself, but i have family there so I know how wicket it sounds when people with the aussie accent say awesome :)
God I'm rambling, I'll stop now, but you have to continue, like right away!
Laura
Author's response
i finally put an australian character in. i'm australian, just randomly. lol. this idea come from a dicussion I had with my sister american and australian accents. anyhoo, glad you liked it. =]