Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-04-06

GWEN! My love lol Awesome chapter as always..lol I'm sorry I could not review sooner..I did tell you I was going to work when you were gonna post it and it made me very sad lol sooo..anyway..

The BN..yeah I picture here as this really old lady...with gross greasy hair and just BLAH lol I don't know why..but thats what I keep picturing..haha So Ava definetly doesn't have to worry about Patrick straying away if he went with the image in my head lol.

LA?!?!?!?!! WTH? He shipping her to La? What for..whats out there..whose out there hmmmmmmmm interesting my dear..interesting indeed.

I think I need to take a page out of your book to avoid the sticky situations IE: Patrick, funeral, Mathew, Awkwardness ensues...yeah so thank you for that lol

And as always I loved it my dear..in fact you got a Hot point for the hospital scene...hmmm if only Mc Steamy was there le sigh!

Author's response

It is really ok to be a late reviewer, it just gave me something to look forward to, my dear. And you pictures the BN as a really olod lady??? I totally pictured her as kind of a college-aged nursing intern, who is totally cute with red-brown hair, but it like, 5'6 so she's a little taller than Patrick. Oh well... And really, who DOES live in LA? I have no idea, personally. lol I'm very familiar with sticky situations. They're horrid... stay away!!!!! I'm so excited about the Hot Point!!!!! (I really would have put McSteamy in, but I thought it would be tacky for Ava to be all blushing over another guy right after being weird about the BN...)