"Are you trying to seduce me?" he asked with a quirky smile. -> Why do I find that so hot? Right: IT’S PATRICK SHY-UMP ASKING!
/Patrick's eyes were all over her, feeling his skin hot under the collar as his alcohol covered wife fussed before him.
"Patrick?" She said quickly, then she looked up at him, it had been a long time, but she knew exactly what those eyes wanted. Within a second, his lips were on hers, kissing her like they were teenagers, her hands fumbling with whatever they could hold on to.
"Here's an idea..." he said in a low voice and skilfully unzipped the dress and it shot to the floor quickly. Shay stared at him in disbelief./ -> It’s a fact that the more you leave to the imagination, the sexier it is. And this was utterly sexy…
I CAN’T BELIEVE HE ANSWERED THE GODDAMN CELL!!! AARRRGGGHHHH!!!
And then he even calls her a bitch… huffs
:*(
The whole part that deals with Shay and Pete sharing intimate moments was so beautifully written that I can’t even think of words to describe it. (Obviously, you could.) I am so impressed. Believe me when I say I couldn’t do it like this. I could never write like this. I am too impatient and probably too lazy. The way you write this story, Katy, takes my breath away.