Gah, I'm late and it's all so hot in here! fans herself down
I'm just going to say this, the writing was great, you depict the chemistry between Patrick and Kate with such gratification, no wonder your readers are going crazy for you!
I am strongly connected to Kate as a character, her flaws, strengths, thoughts, words...everything. You've done a brilliant job, you should just be proud for a moment.
xxx