You should continue, maybe you should have her run away from home and go stay with Mikey and Alicia and then have Brian go on a killing spree and then they could all die and turn into zombies and... okay that got a little out fo hand. But I'm serious about the running away bit and the living with Mikey and Alicia bit. The zombie bit and the killing part - not so much ;D
This is a great story and I'm loving it..
Laura
Author's response
Okay... are you like a mind reader or something?? I already have her going to Mikey's for help in the next chapter. Hmmm... no zombies though... soz lol.
But yer... Okay so I guess that's good that people kinda picked up on that right? Or is it just me being too predictable??
Oh well... anywho, thanx for reviewing!
luv ya!
xxx