MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHha...ha...ha...ha...
Ok, I'm overeacting. But it's reaally good. You should really keep going, and if you don't I will set my Auntie's Dobermann on you and she will be friendly to you until the one thing you can do is update.
Author's response
Thanks I'm glad you like it, I wasn't sure if anyone would like it be the idea wouldn't stop bugging me. I'm almost done the second chapter (woo!) and it should be up soon. It would have been up sooner but i had too much homework.