oh my lordd!!
i just read it all, and i have to tell you... this is one of the best things that i have ever read in my life! a few typos but that understandable.. you're such a good writer im telling you!! especially how you used real life events made it so much more real to me.. sheesh this story made me thing that i would never find love. =(
but one thing i have to say... too many sex scenes.. and i think that they should be more... well normal, not so sure how to explain it but.. yeah..
gosh, i love everything.. for a few chapters i thought that ray was gay. haha that rhymed. lol MV.
hahahah. hmm
i can't wait for an update!! i'll be waiting.
Author's response
Thanks for the review. Don't give up on finding true love, of course it won't be like a romance story but if you are lucky it will be close. There is no such thing as the perfect man (or woman for that matter. Sorry you feel there are too many sex scenes, I've often thought if I had more time I could post the regular chapter and then the same chapter in the "clean" version without the sex but I don't have enough hours in the day. Anyway thanks for reading, I hope you continue to like the story.