Its good so far...but two days and she pregnant? :( Maybe he hook up with her last month too? I like how you made your character flawed.( Sleeping w/G behond Franks back) or whatever they call it. Flawed characters are more interesting.
Author's response
i know. thats what i thought two days...how not possible, but you will see what is going on soon XD!!
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thankyou for reminding me flawed characters are more interesting. the second chapter was about to be a snooze fest...he he ^^. Dont worry, though, i fixed it. i really hope you keep on reading...thank ya bunches for reviewing.