(#) Renay 2006-06-05
I think it's perfect that the first sexual encounter between Chappu and Lulu wasn't romanticized. I've read it that way before, and it just seems so unrealistic, because they're kids! Kids. This, though, is spot on, Lulu's thoughts on comparing the act to magic seem so much like her, and tied in with how she chose to learn black magic instead of white? Yeah, great job. The little details here are again, amazing. Lulu's aunt and her using Yuna to advertise later on, Lulu showing that sentimental side when she wakes and Chappu is gone, the interaction with Kimahri. Favorite so far.