Haha, I didn't even notice it was by you, but I love it.
Does this have any relation to the rusty lever- 'his' smile comparison you were doing a while back?
'Dorky Dumpty sat on a wall. Dorky Dumpty had a great fall...'
You killed me with that.
I love how you never did mention his name, and just all the relations of the different terms and how Atlanta felt, it seemed so her, and it made sense too.
Just plain awesome.
Demenior
Author's response
You! You HAVE come back x3. How was your trip? Anyhoo, I'm super glad you liked it. Glad you remembered that strange analogy, but no it doesn't/ That is a seperate piece I'm working on. I;m glad, it was my fav part too. Even though of course I'm not happy about your death at my words. Thank you, talk to you later (l)-Nuuoa Eclaire