(#) BenRG 2006-06-05
I won't zap you with a bad rating but, unfortunately, this story has failed on several levels.
Firstly, it failed to have a plot. This, in itself is not a fatal error for a fluff story.
However, this failing is compounded by the second and third problems. It is too short and it fails to move or express any real feelings. It didn't really go through how Hermione felt or how those feelings affect her, so it failed as a fluff piece too.
The result, unfortunately, hasn't done anything for me. Sorry about that.
BenRG's Rating: 3/10