This is very well written, I like how you make me want to scream because your leaving off there at all places! Please carry on, I'd like to know more about you other writings if you have any! Please, try to write more soon!
Author's response
i want to thankyou for your comment it will help me decide wheather to put the next chapter on or not. this is only the beging of a book that i really want to finish. i am really glad you like the opening, the rest takes more of the battle between good and evil, ive added romance and magic to it, i hope that the rest of the book is as pleasing for you as the opening was. thank you again