DAMN it, girl!
CONGRATULATIONS on your first LONGEST chapter!! :) that was SO amazing, indeed. i think that chapter just covered about everything from pervertedness, hilarity, touching moments, to complete idiocy. (sp?) lol. it was GREAT. no, it was SUPERB. i cant use any better words to describe it. :) i suddenly remembered while reading this chapter that i told you a long time ago that if you tried some american slang, it would make your fic a little better...and it actually makes a large difference. i'm really enjoying this story; it makes me happy whenever you update (and makes me grumpy whenever my mom tells me to go do something while i'm in the middle of reading it...lol)
one moment i just HAVE to say i LAUGHED SO HARD on was when you wrote, 'Well Brendon, if you ever want a change, just give me a call," Josh said casually.
Brendon looked like he had almost been hit by a bus. "Er... thanks... I'll keep that in mind..." '
xDDD
brendon, hit by a bus? that was the funny bit for me anyway...lol.
keep it up, girl! (shoot, now i feel inclined to write a chapter for you...garh.)
xoxo!
nat
Author's response
oh my god, I dont know what to say! you are so fucking amazing, thankyou so so so so much!!!!! I love you!! I am so happy right now! woohoo - you liked the slang and the crazy mix of everything!! I found that quite funny too, haha. I hate it when my mom asks me to do something when I'm reading your story too!! yes, you should go update :D it will put an even BIGGER smile on my face (I dont actually think thats possible though!) Geets xx