Review for Falter


(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-09

Rindi... You are amazing.

I don't know what else to say...

Ok, that's a lie, I have SOOO MUCH to say: First of all... I knew anyone with the name Gwen could be TERRIBLE. I mean, we Gwens have to stick togethere here, and I'm not gonna lie- I like her a whole bunch better now. Before I was like 'what a little whore'. And well, Pete was quite amazing, too. Who knew he was such a softie?

And OMG- Peyton and Patrick?!?!?! Can anyone say 'sizzle sizzle'? Because I sure can. (sizzle sizzle sizzle sizzle) Now I'msitting here wanting to learn to play the guitar for myself. If only there was a Patrick to teach me. sigh He is quite dreamy here. Great job, my dear!!

And Oliver... acting like a big baby. I could tell Pey and he almost had a sweet little scene at the begining, but I'm glad it ended the way it did. I'm even glad Oliver is feeling badly for this entire mess... it IS his fault after all.

And the girly fight... (smile) I can totally picture it... Patrick getting in the one good punch and running away. Excellent. I could totally picture it. (And Joe's thoughts on the matter were indeed spiffy: the hair pulling even though there wasn't much hair to pull. lol. I love it!)

Ok, so, as always I rated, because you're just so freakin amazing. And you know I totally love you and whatnot... Sooo... FANTASTIC JOB!!!!!

Ok, enough essay, I'll go write now... ;)

Author's response

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL GWEN!!!!! I get soo much praise from you it scares me. Whats even funnier is the fact that were IMing each other and yet I'm responding to your review. Might I just say I love the little sizzle sizzle sizzle lol It made me totally laugh out loud..and I think my brother heard me and knocked too LOL He prolly thinks I'm psycho now! LOL anywho..yes Oliver is the biggest baby you will ever meet..just wait he gets worse..alot worse and Peyton and they kept me occupied for hours at work..I was soo day dreaming of them and their scene and what happens in the next chapter. lol and I had to have Joe see the girly fight..and I really can't write a good fight (also see crappy sexish scene lol) and Joe describing it was kind of happy/funny in its own special way. WOW you had better go and write right now missy! I'm watching PS. LOVED YOUR REVIEW AND YOUR MY BESTEST!