Hey honeybee!
Whoa! Awsome opener. Is the girl Archie's sis? And who was he dreamin about? Ooo, this sounds like it'll be totally amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. So please update soon! Definitely going into my favs. And why wade into this magnificiant ocean when you can dive right in? lol. :P Keep up the awsome work, I'll be looking for that next one.
~Hugz~
~Tory;D
Author's response
Hey Tory!!!
Hmmm in answer to your first question, yes the girl is Archie's sister, but as for the second question, I just can't tell you!!!! ;) Ohhhh I feel soo evil! Mwahahahahahahahaaaa Glad ya think it's going to be amazing, and the next chapter will really only be writen like next week some time, cuz my lecturers at Varsity are killing us with assignments!!!! grumble, grumble :( I fully agree with the diving in coment! I'm a water baby of note, but lets not forget Archie's intense dislike of wide open spaces of water, larger than a bath!!! lmao chat soon
Luv Honey