Review for Falter


(#) riaryder 2007-04-10

Ah, you little minx.
That was hot. And exciting. And sad for poor poor Gwen who I now feel sorry for calling a hoe.
And did I mention it was hot? But I can't believe you left it THERE.
Great update. Just great.
You can have a point if you don't leave me hanging too long. Yes, that'll be that bribery thing again :-)

Author's response

There is a reason for my madness mind you I promise the next chapter will be just as good! LOL and I feel bad for everyone thinking Gwen is a Ho..but she really isn' haven't heard Peyton's side yet so yeah LOL and YES the bribery thing again! I think I will have to type out a Chapter faster next time then