Oh. My. God.
You are amazing
I'm speachless...
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I can't explain how drawn into this story I actually was! I was practically holding my breath, my heart going a million miles a minute.
You wrote that soooo beautifully!!!
I feel extremely honored to actually be able to rate this one. I really feel like it was probably one of your best chapters yet, and you should be super proud of what an amazing job you have done!!!
LOVED IT! LOVE YOU!