"Um, it's Patrick." He said quickly. "You know, from the band..."
That is the best line on the face of the planet.
i love it.
Author's response
Yay! I loved that line too for some reason. It felt very Patrick-like, even though I totally made him so much of a wimp at the first of my story. Kind-of regretting that now. lol. But I guess that's just the way these things work. I feel like I'm evolving faster than my story is.