Review for Forbidden

Forbidden

(#) zaberdeenz 2007-04-15

THE WAIT IS OVER! raises both hands duuuude, you have no idea how often ive been checking if youve updated! a LOT i tell you, LOT. nod
well then. i just knew when L&M had to wait by the door and there was a table for six only..i just knew what wasabout to happen, but i kinda hoped that it wouldnt..and then it happened. and i was SO with Chey. if she wont use that fork to hurt Lyn, then I WILL. for some reason, i like that M was such a dork, calling them emo and all, i just love to hate him. ^____^
and those thoughts, i found them pretty amusing! way to go Amber, extort all the men with sex. LMAO
now im officially concerned bout Gerard. Lyn wears some revealing clothes and he goes all drooling? WTFrank is up with that dude? hypnotic stare
well, keep it coming, you know i love it^____^

Author's response

WTFrank lol how do come up with those? Sorry I was a bit predictable at the restaurant I couldn't help it. Yeah I like Marcus, I had to sort of make him like Lyn and you love to hate Lyn don't you? Every one seems to like the thoughts so that's good, I was worried about them. I've already update so go read it I'll wait her patiently for your review stands still staring into ficwad space waiting for you to read the next chapter