how about Gerard finally tells her about the cutting. Then, by accident, he falls out in the middle of class. Everyone does the "OMG! is he ok?" and he gets rushed to the hospital. Then the next chapter will be about him lieing to everyone about why he was there. Until, the docter tells his mama which shemblusrts out to th rest. Tell me what you think.
Author's response
Hmm... yeah, i can kinda see the passing out in class thing, and im already thinking about a VERY drmatic ending... and what he is writing, VERY important. i dont know about the hospital, hmmm yeah.. i think i could make it work though, woop im already having ideas! THANKS SO MUCH i will make a dedication!! :D