Wow
this story has gotten me on the edge of my seat!
i love it!
your such a good writer!!
i hope everything with rachel and pete works out
but i guess ill have to keep reading to find out!!
lol
well thanks for the good story!!
Author's response
ah, thank you so much.
here's the exact thing I did when I read your review.
let's set the scene, im at my computer desk.
I read your review, and then bring my hands to my mouth, and let them have a sesure, then squeal
"I love people!"
haha, thank you, for giving me a moment.