Ah, how I miss this story!
Super, super wow.
I think you got the abuse victim thing just right. The total non-acceptance is just so realistic. And Molly is just becoming the uber-victim in every step of her life.
I loved it.
And you know what else I've never said? I love the attention to detail with your titles. The songs are always just so fitting. Now that's attention to detail for you.
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