Review for Gee, Gerard, and Frankie

Gee, Gerard, and Frankie

(#) lucyej 2007-04-20

Plagiarism is not good. The fic Sided by Coffeewordangel sound familiar? Your story has the same plot for the beginning and middle, as well as some same or similar quotes. Just because you changed the end doesn't mean that it's original, sorry to say =[

http://community.livejournal.com/mychemicalslash/2881461.html

Let's review, shall we?

Your plot: Gerard from a few years before turns up. Frank finds him and then Gerard comes in. "Gee" gets together with Frank. Then "Gee" comes onto and has sex with Gerard, however in your story he rapes him. "Gee" is a result of a drug-addled mind.

Her plot: Gerard from a few years before turns up. Frank finds him and then Gerard comes in. "Gee" gets together with Frank. Then "Gee" comes onto and has sex with Gerard, however in her plot it is consensual. "Gee" fits nicely into her crack-fic series of weird happenings.

Some key quotes:

Her story: "Can we keep him?"
Your story: "Can we keep him?"

Her story: "We can call him Gee, and you can be Gerard."
Your story: "We can call him Gee, and you can be Gerard,"

Her story: He didn’t bother pointing out that he already was Gerard.
Your story: Gerard was too bewildered to remind Frank that he was already Gerard

Her story:
Gerard ran his fingers through his short, platinum hair
Your story: rubbing his blonde head.

Oh and do I have to point out that her fic was posted about a month before yours.