Okay first if Scar woke up at 12 am- midnight Bob wouldnt have been late! lol! =) Anyways... Uh I get the feeling your going stop writing this story too. DONT GIVE UP! I mean this. Try to imagine what is motivating your characters. They are all so complex and imperfect its great. Bob revealing his feelings for scar and then going all psycho! that was something. How far will he go? And why? As for G sleeping with Rachie (urgh I hate her). I can see him pretending to like her cause she brings him coke- and that whole line about 'I wonder what shes dreaming..wait why do I care!' rocked. G is being motivated by what? his love/hate for scar? his need for drugs? drugs to help him forget scar maybe? But Rachies motivation I just dont get... I mean trading coke for sex with G? Not something youd expect from a chick. Guys yeah..cause theyre stupid like that. But is Rachie that repulsive that shes gotta pay G for it? =( I could see if she was stealing from her brothers stash and giving to G cause she likes him. I mean that would make her a desperate little slut. Foolishly believing she could make G fall for her. I dunno. (I dont like her-can you tell?). Anyways... think of how your characters will react and make something happen to set them off. And wheres Frank? Im still waiting for his lame excuse about the pregnant chick! Scar just cant let that go! ---update -xoxo