Review for Burned

Burned

(#) gucci84 2007-04-23

Wow. I just read all three chapters and it's so intense. Very good. I like how you wrote in Julius' point of view then replayed it in Delilah's.

The first chapter was so cute. Even though they sort of cheated death there. LOL.

Update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens!

-Gucci84