Your grammar was quite off today. So, like the other person said, work on that =) It's hard to get it perfect, though. No one has perfect grammar. Not even me :P
Anyway, Ray better smarten the hell up! We'll have to kick him. Hahaha.
EEEEEE I'm jealous of Kara. I want to marry Bob! XD I love Bob.
This chapter was really good. =)