Hi! Horrible person here. Katy! When I got to the bottom of reading in mock speed because it was so good and see the words in bold, I was like, "Yeah, I'm the last to review...nice." SORRY! I do have a good excuse, however. Really. I was at a baseball game watching JB, of course. What else would I be doing...having a life? Not likely.
Onward to the review. FABULOUS! I really wish we could rate stories with that word or PHENOMENAL! because that is what this chapter is. It's PHENOMULOUS! YES! New Word! I think you wrote the chapter out so very well. It was good to see both sides of the situation too. You made the readers both sympathize and question both characters...well, I did anyway. I told you people would pee. Now look. I can't wait to read more. You are too too good!
Smooches!!
PS: Thanks for the chapter!