(#) facia 2007-04-26
Um...this doesn't really seem like Loveless at all. (Ritsuka loves his mom and thinks he deserves the abuse, he wouldn't be thinking about revenge. He doesn't really cry, either. And Soubi...is not exactly the most positive relationship. Remember Ritsuka doesn't even know he can believe Soubi when Soubi claims he loves him.) Also, you have some spelling errors.