This was a good story! I like the idea about using the children of the orriginal heroes! :) One thing to watch out for: You had some grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed. Don't worry, I make them, too. :P
Author's response
I know I had grammer mistakes. I suck at grammer I will try to get better though I promise! Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story adn idea!