OK, OK, you know I HAD to do the "I like it. Write more" thing. You're going to be so disappointed when you see you have 3 reviews and they're all from me and all are irrelevant. And as far as the lurking and shitty reviews go, I'm glad someone is putting their foot down. I know Katy's frustrated too. But enough about all that jazz. I've compiled a list of things I liked and things I didn't like. I liked:
1. How you made fun of Pete's inability to play his instrument well. Pro Tools! HA! I love you.
2. A black cat named Sunny. Irony was never this cute. And this furry companion mocks Molly. Bonus.
3. I like the little flashbacks you put in there to remind stupid people with no long term memory (i.e.Kyle)of why current events are related directly to the past.
4: I liked your accurate description of CD packaging. I'd personally like to hurt whoever wraps those bitches.
5: Molly and Pete's banter is precious.
6: I really liked your surgeon analogy at the end of the chapter.
And here's what I didn't like:
1. Why are you giving delusional Pete/Molly enthusiasts hope? You know nothing's there aside from a brother/sister thing. Hell, even I know that and I'm fairly dense. And even if they do hook up, it'll be awkward and weird.
So there, a substantial review. Take notes, Ficwadians! Bow down to the GodKyle! Whoa. Sorry. I don’t know what came over me. You know when you’re really tired and you get kind of crazy? Yeah, I think that’s happening to me. On that note, feel better, daaaahling.
Author's response
so I was just about to go to sleep and I read this and squealed. lol
Damn skippy I'm putting my footsies down. I hate that our writing gets blown off and other things get reviews upon reviews. its getting frustrating. esspecially when I see over 700 views per chapter and 10 reviews.
1. Pete's a Pro Tool.
2. I love that damn cat. its actually my friend's cat. damn thing hates me.
3. flashbacks=filler but good filler. ;) that's the secret.
4. cd packaging is seriously the work of the devil. no lie.
5. Molly & Pete banter IS precious. 'cause Pete is a pro tool. basically.
6. lmao. that's my friends favorite analogy to use for anything. so I had to throw it in there.
didn't like:
1. ok, see the thing about that is that all this crap was supposed to happen from the very beginning. thus the big honkin note at the beginning of the story where i said they wouldn't get together. just let it play out pumpkin. Molly/Pete enthusiasts. dude I feel like I have 'shippers like for a tv show. lmao. Only no one is 'shipping the right 'ship. (hey I'm a big ol unconvential myself--Hermione/Draco; Willow/Spike; Patrick Stump/Me..you know how it goes)
...and Kyle's right. Take note ficwadians! that is how you write a review.