well done mate. I marched for ANZAC day and i know feeling of remembering and what they did, just like every other true blue Australian. Your poem was one of a kind, and i have not read anything like it for quite some time. The little story in the begining about the boy asking the man about the medles was good- it had alot of meaning. And i liked how you went onto say about all the other men and woman and how they contributed. Well done. Bloody good.
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thank you so much. This means alot to me. You rock. ANZAC day is very hard day for me bu ti will never forget it. THANKS!!!