sweet second chapter!
is Brenda or Caroline the heroine in this story? (Heroine for lack of better word) anyway, you did a great job, you're so funny when you write. seriously.
favorite line: As if people cared about that when he had such a stunning fro to offer. But that is silly Joe for you.
Author's response
Well, at this point in the story that's still a "secret". You know, mediocre writers like myself have to resort to replies like that. ;)
Your compliments will get you everywhere with me. Thank you so much.