I rated this for Originality.
I think I'm just enjoying reading Pete in a different light, we all know how incurably romantic he (wants) to be and sometimes he comes across as deseperate for love. It's difficult to write a truthful portrayal of someone, who lets face it, we only know through his reactive journals to situations and events he goes through.
I would love to see Kayli's character come out more, like, really see her strengths because at the moment, her character mainly feeds of Pete.
I loved how she reacted to his proposal, I wasn't expecting that and it gave Pete ( and us ) to pee our pants a bit.
This story isn't getting enough credit on here. You're lucky you're more tolerant than I am. :)
Take Care Sweets
K
P.S Thank you for my shout out. It meant a lot, seriously.