Honestly, I have been reading since chapter one. I have never ever reviewed anyone's stories and was determined not to, but oh well. I guess I just don't have anything really constructive to say. It's my favorite story pretty much ever and in my mind it's perfect. I just want more. I would come home from work early just to see if there was a new chapter up, ever since this whole thing started, basically. I am addicted. You broke me, I'm reviewing, though it's not helpful at all. Just thought I would help encourage you? I don't know. I love it. Write more. Maybe more substance next time?
-Kaylee
Author's response
well thanks for reviewing then. but I'm confused, more substance as in what? my story or your review?