Review for Disheveled

Disheveled

(#) meeniemoe 2007-04-29

Oh. My. God. Wait, Melody KNOWS that Bren and Ryan are still at it?...Wait, then what's in it for her?...I hope I'm asking the right questions and that this was what you meant to have left the reader hanging...because if I'm thinking the wrong thing...reply to this comment, lol.
But anyways, if this really is true...WOW. She is a big fucking prostitute...Doing it for the fame and money. So if this chapter is actually the beginning, just more revealing and more 'up-to-date' like 'the present', so to speak...I am shocked.
That was a huge turn of tides there...so keep writing or I'll do something bad like...I don't know.
But update soon please! lol.
xoxo-nat.

Author's response

the answers to your questions are coming...soon ;)