"HEY! Get a tent, would ya?" Joe asked from the other side of the dock. -> Ah, Joe. sighs
The whole dock/ water incident made me think of Friday, 13th. ;)
"Well, he certainly is even more scrumptious looking in person," Katy said crossing her legs as she sat on my bed. -> Ah, Katy. sighs
AH, CECE! sighs** Das chapter war very exciting, hot, moving, etc, etc. I'm a sucker for boys longing for girls for years without ever making an actual move on her. That's what movies do to you: They corrupt your brain.
Author's response
Ah, Alex! sighs
I fully agree with you that movies corrupt your brain, but I'm a sucker for them along with boys longing for girls for years without ever making an actual move too. What can ya do?
Thanks for the review. You pick out the best parts of my story! I love you for that among other amazing things ;)
Smooches.