Review for Left Out

Left Out

(#) meeniemoe 2007-04-30

Yay! You updated! =) I'm so happy...but so depressed at the same time with Jon's behaviour lately. D: I sure hope he won't end up in the hospital hooked up to IVs and stuff...Ryan seems like he really cares...it's really cute fluffy-ness and drama right now. =) I'm lovin' it! Whee...
Although I do have one little thing nagging at me...wouldn't Jon's breath smell after throwing up? So I mean...how does Ryan keep it up, (or Spence and Bren) if they're kissing Jon right after he like purges...?
xoxo-nat

Author's response

Jon generally washes his mouth out with mouth wash afterwards, and since he usually throws up at night the taste of mouth wash isn't all that unatural.